1. They underestimate the importance of having strong photos and lots of them.
  2. They overemphasize their financial well being.
  3. They make themselves sound so perfect that nothing else seems credible.
  4. They say things that they can’t back up in later conversations.
  5. They don’t make it individual or personal enough.
  6. The tone is too heavy-handed on one end of the spectrum, and too earnest, on the other.
  7. They don’t emphasize their experience with children enough.
  8. They don’t paint a picture of the kind of life their children will have with them.
  9. They devote too much space to their infertility problems.
  10. They don’t structure their thoughts or go over their letter carefully enough once they finish.

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